Writing Unit 3
A visit to the hospital..
It was a trip I'll never forget.We were feeling very excited as we were waiting for the bus in order to start our unforgettable adventure. There were around 30 noisy teenagers, 4 impatient teachers and 2 not handsome enough coordinators. We were definitely a huge group. I was in my last year of high school and of course We decided to travel to Carlos Paz, Chapadmalal and Mar del plata for our end-of-year trip.
We found our trip outstanding because It was the first time We were travelling with friends and without any parent, beside the fact that our teachers were there It was like freedom for us.
Anyway just after We arrived to Carlos Paz, We decided to go on an excursion to a square were all the flags of the provinces are.While some students were buying some souvenirs, me and some friends decided to played a game. It was the famous "PILLADITA" but unfortunately when I was running behind a friend, He turned himself and We bumped into each other. I fall and banged my head against the ground and I cut It. All my classmates and teachers were frightened and very nervous.One of the coordinators called an ambulance and instead of going to the next excursion to Cosquin I visit a totally different place, I went on an excursion to the Saint Agustine Hospital, I was afraid at the beginning but after a while I became friend with the doctor and a nurse that looked after me. I think the teachers and my friends felt relieved when they saw that I was fine and when they realized that I was able to continue with our trip.All in all It was and It is going to be a very Memorable trip.
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| This is a collage with pictures of the places I visited and other with my boyfriend too because we made the end-of-year trip together. |
Hi Dani.. your story had made me laugh ajajaj . you always has some problems dear...!! see u tomorrow =)
ResponderEliminarHello Dani..Thank God you haven´t had a deep cut. Fortunately you could continue with your activities! See You!
ResponderEliminarHi Dani! I feel unhappy because I didn't travel to Carlos Paz u.u in that time I was a Nerd and I didn't like to go party :P Now I regret it. Do you have a scar? for that cut in your head? I like the collage :D
ResponderEliminarHello Dani that's bad luck
ResponderEliminarWhen i was in highschool i didn't travel to Carlos Paz T_T
This story reminds me when i was younger.
See you in a moment! :)
I didn't have an end-of-year trip. I just went camping in Campo Quijano with my best friends but I don't regret that because there, I met my husband ;)
ResponderEliminarGreat pics Dani! GOOD ORGANIZATION!Is it a real story??
Some minor mistakes:
"me and some friends decided to played a game."
" I visit a totally different place"
good job! see u tomorrow.
hi dani! nice blog, nice story!
ResponderEliminarIn my en-of-year trip I went to Cafayate for almost a week, not that far but everybody had the chance to go there so we had a really enjoyable trip, see u !